MY POEM

The Lightning

The lightning is a villain

He kills people

The lightning is horrifying

Like the devil

The lightning is a blazing star

Rushing round the universe

The lightning is a comet

Leaving a trail of fire

The lightning is a spear

Aiming for you.

by Dennis

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2 Comments

  1. His poem is amazing and is really well thought out and it is really descriptive and a lot of metaphors and I don’t think any other corrections needed and I really like it and I think there are going to be a lot of positive comments to great poem about lightning.

  2. Harry, this is a little bit brief to be useful – the key facts need to be stated separately. If you’re not sure in class of what’s happening you have a couple of options:

    1) Ask me
    2) Go online to the class site and follow the links to the script online and complete your scene summaries for homework

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