In act 1 scene 5 lady Macbeth receives a letter from Macbeth talking about the witches predictions saying that he would become king of Cassie but the only way that he could become king is that he should kill king Duncan. Lady Macbeth this that Macbeth is not my enough to kill king Duncan. One quotation that I selected was ” unisex me ” this means that she would like to be a man instead of a woman so that she could have more power to kill king Duncan.
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February 2, 2016 at 1:05 pm
Hi Harry,
I enjoyed reading this.
In order to improve, please address the following issues:
1) Please check all spelling and punctuation throughout. It is inaccurate in some parts
2) Please check the lengths of your sentences. There are times when the sentences are very long throughout.
3) Can you try and use some technical vocabulary? We refer to the ability to move from poor to rich, for example, as ‘social mobility’.
4) You could also develop the idea that there is not enough context surrounding the riots. Statistics can be used here.
This lies at 24/40 (D1)