In act 1 scene 7 Macbeth tells lady Macbeth that he doesn’t want to kill king Duncan because he has been good to him one thing lady Macbeth says “screw your courage to the sticking place”
Lady Macbeth is trying to say that he should be ashamed of him self. She is teasing him so that he will change his mind and want to kill king Duncan. Macbeth also had a soliloquy.
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March 20, 2016 at 9:35 am
Hi Harry,
1) The repetition in the first paragraph is a great technique. You need to separate the sentences, however. I can help you with this.
2) Again, the second paragraph just needs to be punctuated better. The argument is good!
3) Be careful not to repeat words like ‘also’. Another thing is how you have used tenses. When you talk about what Hopkins argues or writes, use the present tense. For example,
‘You are also attacking’ becomes ‘You also attack’.
This currently sits at 25/40 (D3)